Would you keep reading this?

At first it was a little tough to keep going but around the middle when it started saying that the girl was gonna run away or whatever, it was easier. this sounds dumb, but personally i hate books that throw out a mature word in every sentence and I'm sure thats just how you talk, and I understand all of the words, but sometimes that can break the sentences up and it doesn't flow as well. I love the story line so far and I hope you keep going with it. I can really picture whats going on in my mind very well, and the only reason you should start over (in my opinion) is if you can't come up with more of the story line. unless you go blank, do not stop beacause there is tons of potential in your beginning and I think it is a success.